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18th Apr 2012, 4:52 AM

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cattservant on 18th Apr 2012, 6:43 AM

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But it's just getting nice and dark and disorienting...

It's good, how the speech bubble blends in with the background. It enhances rather than distracts

sawyerLUVSyou on 19th Apr 2012, 3:49 AM

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We're going back and redoing all of the speech bubbles in the previous pages. :)

cattservant on 19th Apr 2012, 6:19 AM

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A happy example of the fluidity of the webcomic medium. It is always a 'work in progress' until your publish the book. Plus, it's not like you are on page 100 yet!

I really enjoy the dreamlike quality of the story and simple color and clarity of the art and am looking forward to more.
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