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13th Apr 2012, 3:26 AM

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TheOneBlueGecko on 13th Apr 2012, 4:05 AM

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I really am liking this comic, the single (or double) panels per page make it nice an relaxing to read. And the art is beautifully simple and drawn really well.

My only comment is that I don't think your text bubbles fit the style. Not the text itself, but the thin black line. I don't really have a clear suggestion of what I would do differently, but I feel like it takes away from the comic a bit.

sawyerLUVSyou on 14th Apr 2012, 3:13 AM

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Yeahhh, I had that same thought. I'm not sure how to change it either. xD
Once I do, I'll go back and edit the pages.

cattservant on 13th Apr 2012, 3:47 PM

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A quintessential question if there ever was one...
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